Pretty Crazy

OK please give me your suggestions on this this is part four so you may need to read parts 1-3 first. Thanks :smt001

Hey roon! Welcome back! I now have part four of my story on. Please review! :smt001 Thank you

Look in your library's online catalogue (if it has one) and do a search for how to write books. That's what I do.

Hey jessabelle4C! I raised the knife as if I planned to kill him. I didn't. Yet. It might look better like this: I raised the knife as if I planned ...

Ooh! This is awesome! :elephant: It's creative and original (so far). I'm not good at nitpicks, so you won't be getting those from me. :oops: But here are some suggestions. ...

OK once again I couldn't find any grammar problems. Your sentences are well-structured. “What do I do,” said Michael. This is about all I could find. There should be a ...

Wow this is turning out to be really good. I can't find anything wrong with it grammatically. Your style is amazing, it's so realistic. I feel like I'm actually there. ...

I need it to be error-free first! You don't have to make it perfect the first time around. Just write all your ideas down and then go back and fix ...

Voices. Where were they coming from? Kevin forced his eyes to open. Everything was blurry, he could make out dark blobs against a white background. They were talking, but he ...

Hmm, never thought of it like that before. That's great advice magnusbanefan13!

Banned for talking about a movie I've never heard of!

Hey same for me too! Yes since you write it it's your rights but people can still steal it. I don't think it's the same as a legal copyright. So ...

Just wondering, when you are looking at books what kind of title attracts you? Creepy titles? Cool titles? Or something that sparks your curiosity? Also, what kind of cover design ...

OK I'm not good at reviewing poetry, but hey, anyone can tell that was a well written piece of work. I felt the intensity of it. You definitely have the ...

You get an extra large pizza. Lucky! -insert coin-